novelraw Completion Remarks [END]
Completion Remarks [END]
Completion Remarks
Hello everyone, I am Yiweixie.
Exactly as everyone saw, this book finally welcomed its conclusion after finishing writing the individual side stories of the female leads. According to convention, I ought to express some viewpoints, conversing a bit with everyone. But picking up the pen reaching this point, I unexpectedly momentarily didn't know what to say, also lacking any structure and rules. Therefore just writing wherever my thoughts reach, if there are any inappropriate places please be magnanimous.
Previously when writing web novels, I saw a post written by a senior, the general meaning was actually stating when writing web novels nearing the end, one solely wholeheartedly thinks about concluding. The me at that time disapproved, because having successively written many books, although the lengths couldn't be considered extremely long, several hundreds of thousands of words were always there, I entirely entirely didn't quite possess this kind of feeling. Uniquely this book truly allowed me to experience it genuinely.
That feeling of writing reaching the end struggling to move forward, hard to move an inch, picking up the pen entirely unable to continue writing downward truly made me sad.
Actually traversing the reasons within my heart I understood them all. Some were framework issues left over since the beginning of the story's birth, some were new issues born after my revisions, some again were issues caused by my limited energy due to being busy with work. Resulting in reaching the final volume, one chapter required holding it in for many days, making the frequency of updates become somewhat abstract, this is my fault.
I also have to admit, regarding this story I actually harbor regrets. Unavoidably possessing some high-spirited and vigorous moments that ought to be given, some completely intact aspects that ought to be given were overlooked by me. This actually is my old flaw. Sometimes when writing I perpetually subconsciously bring along some things not quite positive and upward-striving. Therefore every time when writing the completion remarks I perpetually think: next time I will definitely write a more upward-striving story. However setting out I perpetually unknowingly forget.
I modified a portion of this book's outline midway, while the remaining majority remained unmodified. Especially the early stages utilizing the original outline to write lots of things, once modifying it easily results in a heap of conflicts at every turn, therefore the modified portion couldn't be considered much.
Among them the greatest modification resided in, the relationship between Renee and Helaire.
I stated in the early stages, Renee would traverse the entire story, also being the most difficult female lead to capture. Actually the outline content at that time was spoken based on the foundation that Helaire and Renee were the identical existence. Phrasing it like this, actually many plotlines became exceptionally coherent, especially the end of the third volume with Baimon's entrance and the fourth volume sending Fisher back to the past, to the extent the plotlines of the final volume would become reasonable.One, is the aspect of the Ocean's Humanity; the other, is the aspect of the Ocean's Divinity.
Merely if proceeding like that, Renee perhaps would become more controversial, even surpassing Elizabeth.
Therefore reaching the end of the third volume, I still grew softhearted, separating Renee and Helaire. Ultimately conversely resulting in losing control over the plot.
The fourth volume's "Gui" became Helaire. In the fifth volume where Helaire incited destruction everywhere, inherently there shouldn't have been her direct figure, but rather many plotlines and scenes of fierce conflict involving Renee's participation. This way the entirety would also be more relaxed, interesting, and passionate. Until the final sixth volume, Fisher realizing Renee was the Ocean's content also turned into searching for her final avatar, only then would it bring out a bit of heaviness.
This decision of mine made the bit of heaviness originally only surfacing at the ending arrive early, practically covering the entire fifth and sixth volumes, this is sufficiently called a stroke of failure.
Perhaps among this there were methods to remedy, merely I truly lacked the corresponding ability and energy, allowing me to meticulously untangle the outline to organize the plotlines, making the most perfect judgement, therefore making me feel regret.
And some I ought to revise but didn't, similar to Asuka and Jasmine's plotlines was exactly like this. There were also some other minor ones, placed here can solely be exhibited.
As for Elizabeth, from beginning to end I never once revised her screen time. Her entrance, wickedness, and pitiableness until finally reconciling with herself, reconciling with Fisher, were completely content within the original outline.
Actually I deeply favored Elizabeth. I bestowed lots of this book's content to her, portraying her hysterical love as much as possible.
This image I referenced the Yandere image, the Three-Dimensional World's Yandere.
Perhaps there are readers who like her, otherwise there wouldn't be this many readers waiting to see her ending; also perhaps there are readers who loathe her, believing she's an out-and-out lunatic, cursing and swearing in the comments.
Merely based on me speaking, she possesses both. Fisher possessed places he did wrong, she identically was like so, therefore solely making it appear that twisted...
In the previous chapters and side stories I wrote lots of sweetness between her and Fisher when young, also writing her cruelty and madness in the main text. Therefore reaching the side story, these actually were entirely exhausted in writing, I therefore no longer wrote these repetitive things.
The only thing she lacked entirely, was merely face-to-face reconciliation with Fisher, nothing more than this.
After that, we entirely know welcoming her is a new life, and how exactly that new life is, referencing the blank space of their past time was perfectly appropriate.
Hey, carefully reviewing once, I practically fiercely crashed all the way toward controversial places, making me somewhat unable to help laughing.
However everyone, this isn't to prove how noble and aloof my taste is, how the remaining plots more welcomed by the market are pandering. I extremely like reading various other kinds of articles, I read whichever subjects, I also write whichever subjects.
Actually I fiercely envy those authors whose works write very relaxed and interestingly, because I myself cannot write it. I already attempted to insert humorous and witty content in many places, but the overall tone actually perpetually plummeted, became heavy. I'm insensitive toward the market's reaction, conversely actually quite sensitive toward my own emotional repercussions (annoyed).
Therefore when every book finishes writing, I completely will write the content exactly like what I'm writing now in the completion remarks, "the next book absolutely must be more positive and upward-striving". However every transformation unavoidably possesses some unfulfilled expectations.
"Next time will definitely do better", I want to make this promise to myself, yet also seemingly feel I entirely lack confidence.
However, writing toward me is a wonderful puzzle. In this era still being able to have a bit of a matter letting oneself become hurried and focused is truly not easy. Thinking like this, even if the next attempt cannot completely achieve the earnest anticipations of this time, it ultimately possesses a bit of progressive change.
This way, during the writing of the story next time perhaps there will be some invigoration right.
Alright, everyone, regardless of what, I already finished writing.
Sometimes when busy with other matters occasionally thinking about it I entirely would feel inconceivable: "Good heavens, I wrote a work of over three million words." Carefully thinking about it, this also counts as a matter worth recalling.
Day and night repeatedly chapter upon chapter section upon section, entirely relied on the readers who read this book.
Here, exceptionally thanking everyone who could read this story all the way to the end, seeing up to here.
Truly, ten thousand thanks to you all!
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Everything regarding this book has already been stated entirely. As for the next book actually I already determined the general content well, also wrote out the corresponding outline well. But here I also don't want to draw any flatcakes (make empty promises), also won't spoil the corresponding content of the next book, solely able to ensure there will be a different experience right.
Waiting for me to rest for a period of time, carefully pondering a bit I will upload brand new chapters anew.
Then it's precisely, completed scattering flowers!
:.ヽ().:+
Let's meet again in our next story.
Yiweixie
5.17.2024
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