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In a world of sky islands orbiting around a core of mist, humanity is besieged with countless threats. When a young girl from the slums unwittingly becomes one of those threats, she finds herself capable of horrific things that she can’t help but learn to love…Vigor Mortis is a lighthearted story about existential terror. Come for the horror, stay for the hope. Collapse
Dark, R-18, Female Protagonist, Monsters, Magic, Age Progression, Weak to Strong, Special Abilities
I genuinely think this is a good read, but if you are someone who dislikes doomed romances, you won't enjoy following this author's work. If you don't mind it, then I highly recommend this and her other book, "Hive Minds Give Good Hugs". Personally, I'm starting to dislike this trope myself but I'm already in too deep. Gonna check out her other works. Romance is not a significant part of this one given that it doesn't even have a romance tag, but it's there.
There are 2 things I'm willing to bet on after reading this: First - the author is female. And not because mc is a girl but because it often reads like a girls diary and its constant "I dont know" and "I mean" in speech to the point I imagine the characters have finger twirling in their hair while saying something.Second - that she is american because she is so hung up on gender pronouns (and goodness forbid some character wont address another properly) and gender identification or whatever, she devotes whole paragraphs on their importance across multiple chapters and this is distracting because MIDDLE AGES. There are more homosexual pairs than straight ones for some reason and there are even gender swapping transexuals. One chapter you have templars in full plate armor, the church telling them to smack some sinners and people take baths in f#cking barrels. Another chapter you have a discussion about how a woman/man wants to be a man/woman and others encourage them while clapping. And there is not even a single person in the world who will show some negative reaction to it. Wow.Great novel otherwise.
+1 the nonsense of the world is polluting even the fantasy it's crazy
My favorite moment is when the heroes discuss the gender determination of one of the characters immediately after participating in the massacre and barely surviving. But the novel itself is very good
Agree with everything you said. The novel was going great for dozens and dozens of chapters. Then suddenly there was great importance to a characters pronouns. And from that point it was all downhill. It stopped being character building, but turned into a competition to see if the new chapter can outdo the previous with the amount of LGBT stuff. To the level of being distracting. As previous posted have mentioned, it didn't even fit into the story. It's a shame, because outside of that, the writing and story telling was great.
rig·or mor·tis/ˌriɡər ˈmôrdəs/nounMEDICINEstiffening of the joints and muscles of a body a few hours after death, usually lasting from one to four days.(Vigor Mortis is the title)
This novel is what I enjoy. This story is a journey, Of personal discovery, Understanding, and growing. But not the normal heroic type but a more realistic but also darker mc. She is not outright evil the stupid type that only know how to kill kill kill like a rino on Viagra, but sees the world in her own unique way. This is a diamond of a novel. Yes, it has magic, mana, hunter guilds, nobles, and a medieval setting. But the same all cultivation novel starts with a broken mc, has sects, stupid faces slapping and wanting to be stupid demons and hoarding bitches and killing everyone else. It comes with the genre, that being said believe anyone who reads it will find something interesting in this novel. And I have never seen necromancy done like this. It starts with being able to interact with souls and goes deep into its own theory. Most simple just rise undead kill more people and build a legion. But this novel takes a different more in-depth approach to necromancy I have never read before.
The book name always reminded me of the word rigor mortis which is a postmortem change resulting in the stiffening of the body muscles and it bothers me a lot. Good story though, much recommended. I'll rate it as 4/5.
Well some guy said that this was the only book that stood up to the masterpiece that is The Perfect Run, so here I am about to start reading
I'm coming from the same comment, was he trustworthy?
Honestly, no. But that doesn't mean you shouldnt shouldn't the novel a try because its damn good, just not at the same level as perfect run imo
This book is a masterpiece. Everything is 1000/5 except the update schedule but even that is OK everytime it comes on my subscription feed i get a warm happy feeling and then crippling sadness when it leaves on a cliffhanger im looking at you chapter 99
[Overall]4.5/5This book is an absolute banger, but it is very dark and depressing at times, although the humor is quite good. The update schedule is also ass, but that's the price you pay for good writing quality.[Characters]5/5Every character is complex and realistic, there aren't any who are not unique or mutable. Most of the characters do fall into certain archetypes, but their personalities are developed enough that it isn't really a problem.[Setting]4.5/5Unique floating island-based world, and the SpoilerMistwatcher and his fog are cool as shit. However, the main city is a stereotypical medieval city with all of the inequalities that come with being a stereotypical medieval city. Likewise, outside the city there is a stereotypical monster forest filled with surprisingly creative monsters, and of course there is an adventurer's guild, because why wouldn't there be an adventurer's guild. Were the rest of the worldbuilding not extremely engaging, this alone would drop the setting to a 4.[Premise and Plot]4/5Doesn't spoil major plot events, but still kind of spoilery. Read at your own risk. SpoilerThe main character starts with a soul manipulation ability that lets her create zombies with all of their past memories and abilities, which is pretty cool. Unfortunately, many of the major plot points are somewhat arbitrary and give off MC Aura vibes (Looking at you, Lyn the Metal Thief. Metal is allegedly this hyper-rare and hyper-regulated resource and you just find it on command?). Also, the church has a hate boner for the MC but she didn't really do anything to cause it.Read this novel, it's good, I promise.
I was going to make a review because if you read web novels for some time you should be reading this shit, but this review of pudy248 its really good and to the point so im not going to move him down in the list to be lost in obscurity.
im traped in a reading frenzy of this novel, everything i said about the review of pudy248 stands but now that im near the last chapter released there is so much more, so f#cking more i would like to talk i would like to awe in here that the review doesnt feel valid, complete anymore.what i can say is that you should join us and let the fulfilling existencial dread take you for a ride
Shit, this is really good. I love it, but it sometimes gets REALLY dark.Edit: I've caught up to the translation and GOD DAMN is this good. Like, the characters actually feel like PEOPLE, not characters. This is honestly one of the best books I've ever read.Plot 10/10Characters 10/10translation quality 10/10writing 10/10world building 10/10etc...
This book is really good. Main character is adorable and likeable even if she's a little weird and the story gets really good as it goes on. Her power is basically necromancy, but cooler, and it gets even cooler later in the story.Anyways this is good
In a world of sky islands orbiting around a core of mist, humanity is besieged with countless threats. When a young girl from the slums unwittingly becomes one of those threats, she finds herself capable of horrific things that she can’t help but learn to love…Vigor Mortis is a lighthearted story about existential terror. Come for the horror, stay for the hope. Collapse
Dark, R-18, Female Protagonist, Monsters, Magic, Age Progression, Weak to Strong, Special Abilities
I genuinely think this is a good read, but if you are someone who dislikes doomed romances, you won't enjoy following this author's work. If you don't mind it, then I highly recommend this and her other book, "Hive Minds Give Good Hugs". Personally, I'm starting to dislike this trope myself but I'm already in too deep. Gonna check out her other works. Romance is not a significant part of this one given that it doesn't even have a romance tag, but it's there.
There are 2 things I'm willing to bet on after reading this: First - the author is female. And not because mc is a girl but because it often reads like a girls diary and its constant "I dont know" and "I mean" in speech to the point I imagine the characters have finger twirling in their hair while saying something.Second - that she is american because she is so hung up on gender pronouns (and goodness forbid some character wont address another properly) and gender identification or whatever, she devotes whole paragraphs on their importance across multiple chapters and this is distracting because MIDDLE AGES. There are more homosexual pairs than straight ones for some reason and there are even gender swapping transexuals. One chapter you have templars in full plate armor, the church telling them to smack some sinners and people take baths in f#cking barrels. Another chapter you have a discussion about how a woman/man wants to be a man/woman and others encourage them while clapping. And there is not even a single person in the world who will show some negative reaction to it. Wow.Great novel otherwise.
+1 the nonsense of the world is polluting even the fantasy it's crazy
My favorite moment is when the heroes discuss the gender determination of one of the characters immediately after participating in the massacre and barely surviving. But the novel itself is very good
Agree with everything you said. The novel was going great for dozens and dozens of chapters. Then suddenly there was great importance to a characters pronouns. And from that point it was all downhill. It stopped being character building, but turned into a competition to see if the new chapter can outdo the previous with the amount of LGBT stuff. To the level of being distracting. As previous posted have mentioned, it didn't even fit into the story. It's a shame, because outside of that, the writing and story telling was great.
rig·or mor·tis/ˌriɡər ˈmôrdəs/nounMEDICINEstiffening of the joints and muscles of a body a few hours after death, usually lasting from one to four days.(Vigor Mortis is the title)
This novel is what I enjoy. This story is a journey, Of personal discovery, Understanding, and growing. But not the normal heroic type but a more realistic but also darker mc. She is not outright evil the stupid type that only know how to kill kill kill like a rino on Viagra, but sees the world in her own unique way. This is a diamond of a novel. Yes, it has magic, mana, hunter guilds, nobles, and a medieval setting. But the same all cultivation novel starts with a broken mc, has sects, stupid faces slapping and wanting to be stupid demons and hoarding bitches and killing everyone else. It comes with the genre, that being said believe anyone who reads it will find something interesting in this novel. And I have never seen necromancy done like this. It starts with being able to interact with souls and goes deep into its own theory. Most simple just rise undead kill more people and build a legion. But this novel takes a different more in-depth approach to necromancy I have never read before.
The book name always reminded me of the word rigor mortis which is a postmortem change resulting in the stiffening of the body muscles and it bothers me a lot. Good story though, much recommended. I'll rate it as 4/5.
Well some guy said that this was the only book that stood up to the masterpiece that is The Perfect Run, so here I am about to start reading
I'm coming from the same comment, was he trustworthy?
Honestly, no. But that doesn't mean you shouldnt shouldn't the novel a try because its damn good, just not at the same level as perfect run imo
This book is a masterpiece. Everything is 1000/5 except the update schedule but even that is OK everytime it comes on my subscription feed i get a warm happy feeling and then crippling sadness when it leaves on a cliffhanger im looking at you chapter 99
[Overall]4.5/5This book is an absolute banger, but it is very dark and depressing at times, although the humor is quite good. The update schedule is also ass, but that's the price you pay for good writing quality.[Characters]5/5Every character is complex and realistic, there aren't any who are not unique or mutable. Most of the characters do fall into certain archetypes, but their personalities are developed enough that it isn't really a problem.[Setting]4.5/5Unique floating island-based world, and the SpoilerMistwatcher and his fog are cool as shit. However, the main city is a stereotypical medieval city with all of the inequalities that come with being a stereotypical medieval city. Likewise, outside the city there is a stereotypical monster forest filled with surprisingly creative monsters, and of course there is an adventurer's guild, because why wouldn't there be an adventurer's guild. Were the rest of the worldbuilding not extremely engaging, this alone would drop the setting to a 4.[Premise and Plot]4/5Doesn't spoil major plot events, but still kind of spoilery. Read at your own risk. SpoilerThe main character starts with a soul manipulation ability that lets her create zombies with all of their past memories and abilities, which is pretty cool. Unfortunately, many of the major plot points are somewhat arbitrary and give off MC Aura vibes (Looking at you, Lyn the Metal Thief. Metal is allegedly this hyper-rare and hyper-regulated resource and you just find it on command?). Also, the church has a hate boner for the MC but she didn't really do anything to cause it.Read this novel, it's good, I promise.
I was going to make a review because if you read web novels for some time you should be reading this shit, but this review of pudy248 its really good and to the point so im not going to move him down in the list to be lost in obscurity.
im traped in a reading frenzy of this novel, everything i said about the review of pudy248 stands but now that im near the last chapter released there is so much more, so f#cking more i would like to talk i would like to awe in here that the review doesnt feel valid, complete anymore.what i can say is that you should join us and let the fulfilling existencial dread take you for a ride
Shit, this is really good. I love it, but it sometimes gets REALLY dark.Edit: I've caught up to the translation and GOD DAMN is this good. Like, the characters actually feel like PEOPLE, not characters. This is honestly one of the best books I've ever read.Plot 10/10Characters 10/10translation quality 10/10writing 10/10world building 10/10etc...
This book is really good. Main character is adorable and likeable even if she's a little weird and the story gets really good as it goes on. Her power is basically necromancy, but cooler, and it gets even cooler later in the story.Anyways this is good
- Chapter 1: Wavering Souls
- Chapter 2: Their Soul and You
- Chapter 3: Return with Interest
- Chapter 4: Still Warm
- Chapter 5: Yellow Sky
- Chapter 6: The Mistwatcher
- Chapter 7: Living Blasphemy
- Chapter 8: Not a Kiddo
- Chapter 9: Fattening Up
- Chapter 10: Hunting for Friends
- Chapter 11: Team Training
- Chapter 12: Home Team
- Chapter 13: The Cusp
- Chapter 14: Hugs at Home
- Chapter 15: Growing Vigilance
- Chapter 16: Rout on the Route
- Chapter 17: Monstrous Musings
- Chapter 18: Hound eat Hound
- Chapter 19: Sticky-Souled Situation
- Chapter 20: Culture Shock
- Chapter 21: Girl Behind the Window
- Chapter 22: Future Worries
- Chapter 23: Sleeping Twice
- Chapter 24: Shattered Mirror, Pt. 1
- Chapter 25: Shattered Mirror, Pt. 2
- Chapter 26: Ego Death
- Chapter 27: Monster Mash
- Chapter 28: Friendship Prison
- Chapter 29: Take Your Vitamins
- Chapter 30: Poisonous Revelations
- Chapter 31: Hiverock Night
- Chapter 32: Mother of Thieves
- Chapter 33: Lion's Den
- Chapter 34: Trapped Inside
- Chapter 35: Future Promises
- Chapter 36: Connections Drawn
- Chapter 37: The One Below All
- Chapter 38: Deus ex Anima
- Chapter 39: Lines Drawn
- Chapter 40: Family of Lies
- Chapter 41: No Better Option
- Chapter 42: Hugs and Horrors
- Chapter 43: Penultimate Practice
- Chapter 44: Worst Nightmare
- Chapter 45: Lonely Genocide
- Chapter 46: A Hunter's Song
- Chapter 47: Work-Life Balance
- Chapter 48: Things That Matter
- Chapter 49: Do No Harm
- Chapter 50: Stacking the Deck
- Chapter 51: Twisted Love
- Chapter 52: Big Happy Family
- Chapter 53: A Lark's Story
- Chapter 54: Draken's Den
- Chapter 55: Head Full of Sky
- Chapter 56: Soul Surgery
- Chapter 57: Family Meeting
- Chapter 58: Fragile
- Chapter 59: Chicken Soup for the Undead Soul
- Chapter 60: Stretched Thin
- Chapter 61: Delicious Humans
- Chapter 62: Void Beast
- Chapter 63: Void Child
- Chapter 64: Understanding
- Chapter 65: Rest and Recrimination
- Chapter 66: Big Sister
- Chapter 67: Pit of Despair
- Chapter 68: Let Them Come
- Chapter 69: Sovereign Right
- Chapter 70: Feelings
- Chapter 71: Center of Attention
- Chapter 72: What He Deserves
- Chapter 73: Immune System
- Chapter 74: Divinity
- Chapter 75: Calm Before the Storm
- Chapter 76: Skyfall
- Chapter 77: Family Feast
- Chapter 78: Atrophy
- Chapter 79: Blue Ocean
- Chapter 80: Being Known
- Chapter ???: Dragoneye Mortis, (1)
- Chapter ???: Dragoneye Mortis, (2)
- Chapter 81: Forest Ecosystem
- Chapter 82: Inevitable Decision
- Chapter 83: Monster
- Chapter 84: Trust and Respect
- Chapter 85: Spooky Sensations
- Chapter 86: Monster vs. Monster
- Chapter 87: No Escape
- Chapter 88: Good Deed
- Chapter 89: Rhetorical Questions
- Chapter 90: Disgusting
- Chapter 91: Personal
- Chapter 92: Lady in Waiting
- Chapter 93: Being Seen
- Chapter 94: Hindsight and Forethought
- Chapter 95: Weird Mask Day
- Chapter 96: Making Headway
- Chapter 97: Heretic House
- Chapter 98: Time to Think
- Chapter 99: Humanity Overrated
- Chapter 100: Life and Death
- Chapter 101: Plotting Dates
- Chapter 102: Stealth Mission
- Chapter 103: Boss Battle
- Chapter 104: Deum Timete
- Chapter 105: No Good Deed
- Chapter 106: Laws and Customs of War
- Chapter 107: Goes Unpunished
- Chapter 108: Site 4
- Chapter 109: Epsilon-One
- Chapter 110: Invasive Examinations
- Chapter 111: Meet and Greet
- Chapter 112: Parallels
- Chapter 113: Crime Against Nature
- Chapter 114: Lost and Found
- Chapter 115: Filia Mortis
- Chapter 116: Ars Longa, Vita Brevis
- Chapter 117: Difference in Scale
- Chapter 118: Stairway to Heaven
- Chapter 119: Last Meal
- Chapter 120: Pass or Fail
- Chapter 121: Letting It Out
- Chapter 122: The Road Home
- Chapter 123: Homemade Horrors
- Chapter 124: Reunited
- Chapter 125: Cross-Purposes
- Chapter 126: Sleeping Dragon
- Chapter 127: Fire Flight
- Chapter 128: Trustworthy
- Chapter 129: Unwanted Responsibility
- Chapter 130: Skeletons in the Closet
- Chapter 131: Hollow Vessel
- Chapter 132: Stained Glass
- Chapter 133: Depressed Face
- Chapter 134: She Deserves It
- Chapter 135: Survival Preferred
- Chapter 136: Toy Story
- Chapter 137: Contentment
- Chapter 138: Make Cuddles, Also War
- Chapter 139: Big Happy Family
- Chapter 140: Stronger
- Chapter 141: Soul to Soul
- Chapter 142: Follow Orders
- Chapter 143: Ironsoul
- Chapter 144: Heresy
- Chapter 145: Do or Die
- Chapter 146: Aftershock
- Chapter 147: Dissonance
- Chapter 148: In Plain Sight
- Chapter 149: Drinking Games
- Chapter 150: Subterfuge
- Chapter 151: Propositions
- Chapter 152: City Killer
- Chapter 153: Demigod Daycare
- Chapter 154: Worldshaker
- Chapter 155: Truce
- Chapter 156: Calamity Protocol
- Chapter 157: Shells
- Chapter 158: Superior Master
- Chapter 159: Queen's Gambit
- Chapter 160: Pneuma
- Chapter 161: Lost Comforts
- Chapter 162: Little Sister
- Chapter 163: Duty and Station
- Chapter 164: Both
- Chapter 165: Better Than Ever
- Chapter 166: COME ON AND SLAM
- Chapter 167: Resignation
- Chapter 168: Smooth
- Chapter 169: Principissa Mortis
- Chapter 170: Principissa Vita
- Chapter 171: Little Bug
- Chapter 172: Monsters and Mortals
- Chapter 173: Regrettable but Inevitable
- Chapter 174: Unspeakable Horrors
- Chapter 175: Chasm of Disdain
- Chapter 176: Teleology
- Chapter 177: Investigations
- Chapter 178: Skyclad
- Chapter 179: Deals with Devils
- Chapter 180: Bisection
- Chapter 181: Patient Examination
- Chapter 182: Partial Reconciliations
- Chapter 183: Absolution
- Chapter 184: Crumbling Away
- Chapter 185: Together
- Chapter 186: Mom Trifecta
- Chapter 187: Tour Guide
- Chapter 188: AND WELCOME TO THE JAM
- Chapter 189: Consumat Mundum
- Chapter 190: Lost Marbles
- Chapter 191: Found Family
- Chapter 192: The Island of Life and Death
- Chapter 193: Apotheosis
- Chapter 194: Num Malus Eram
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