Chapter 478: Welcome To Hope Sanctuary: Checkpoint One
Chapter 478: Welcome To Hope Sanctuary: Checkpoint One
Lachlan had stood in lines before.
Military lines. Processing lines. Lines where someone with a clipboard decided whether you slept alone or with 50 other men, whether you were put on latrine duty or get the night off. He understood the rhythm of them, the quiet rules that were never spoken out loud.
Clipboards were the perfect way that people learned very quickly what not to say.
But even with all his experience, this line felt worse.
It wasn’t chaotic, and that was the problem. Chaos meant mistakes, and mistakes meant opportunity. This was controlled, orderly, and slow in a way that pressed on the back of his skull the longer they stood in it.
The first barricade came into full view after what felt like hours under and unforgiving sun.
Two sawhorse barriers sat across the road, angled just enough to funnel people into a single-file approach. Sandbags had been stacked behind them with care, not because they needed the cover, but because it sent a message.
This wasn’t improvised. It was practiced.
Two soldiers stood watch with rifles held low but ready. Their uniforms were clean in a way that didn’t match the world outside the walls. Their boots were polished and their posture was so perfect that everything in Lachlan wanted to mess them up.
Behind them stood a folding table.
Behind the table stood a man with a clipboard.
He wasn’t military. Lachlan clocked that immediately. No uniform, no visible weapon, and no interest in the riflemen flanking him. He wore a vest with too many pockets and had the relaxed confidence of someone who knew violence would happen for him, not to him.
"Next," the man called out, his voice flat.
The group in front of them moved forward as one. A family of four. The parents stood stiff and upright, their eyes forward. The kids stayed quiet, clutching straps and sleeves.
"Names," the clipboard man said, already writing. "Powers. Levels."
The father hesitated for half a second too long.
"We... we don’t have—"
"Name," the man repeated without looking up.
Lachlan watched the father swallow.
They answered. One by one. The man wrote quickly, barely glancing at them.
"Supplies?" the clipboard man asked.
The father gestured to their bags.
"Open them."
Two soldiers stepped forward and went through the packs with efficient disinterest. Food disappeared into bins. Tools followed. A knife was taken and not returned.
"Ten percent," the clipboard man said, tapping the page. "You keep ten percent."
"But—" the mother started.
The clipboard man looked up then.
It wasn’t anger that shut her up. It was boredom.
"Next," he said.
The family was waved through a narrow gap to the right, herded toward the second checkpoint without another word.
Lachlan exhaled slowly.
"Well," he murmured, keeping his tone light, "I could feel that welcoming warmth of the southern regions."
Zubair didn’t respond. His gaze stayed fixed ahead, jaw tight.
Sera stood a half-step behind them, her posture loose and unbothered, humming softly under her breath. Lachlan didn’t miss the way her fingers flexed against her pack straps, or how her eyes tracked the clipboard man instead of the soldiers.
That wasn’t curiosity.
That was calculation.
They advanced when the line did, step by measured step, until they stood directly in front of the table.
The clipboard man finally looked up properly.
His gaze slid over them, quick and assessing, lingering just a little too long on Sera before moving on.
"Names," he said again.
"Lachlan Pierce," Lachlan offered easily, flashing a friendly smile. "I go by Lach."
The man wrote it down without comment.
"Power."
"Lightning."
The pen paused.
The clipboard man looked up again, this time with interest. "Level?"
Lachlan blinked. That was the problem, wasn’t it? He’d never had to quantify it. Never had to compare himself to anyone else.
"Four?" he offered, pitching it like a guess.
The man made a small noise and wrote it down. "Acceptable."
That was it. No test. No verification. Just a number that would apparently decide whether Lachlan ate tonight.
Zubair stepped forward next.
"Name."
"Zubair Hossaini."
"Power."
"Fire."
The man nodded once, unimpressed. "Level?"
Zubair hesitated just long enough for Lachlan to feel it.
"Five," Zubair said finally.
"Common," the clipboard man replied, already writing. "At least you are useful."
Lachlan’s smile tightened.
Alexei stepped forward.
"Name."
"Alexei Morozov."
"Power."
"Ice."
The clipboard man laughed.
It wasn’t loud. It wasn’t cruel. It was dismissive.
"There is no such thing as an ice, power" he said, shaking his head. "If it’s anything, it’s water. Level?"
Alexei’s expression didn’t change. "Then I suppose I am water."
"And the level?" the man prompted.
Alexei considered for a moment. "Four. Maybe five."
The clipboard man snorted. "Water doesn’t go that high."
Alexei nodded politely. "I see."
Then he flicked his wrist.
Lachlan felt the temperature drop before he heard the sound.
A sharp crack split the air as moisture condensed violently, forming a three-foot ice spike that slammed into the reinforced wall behind the table. It embedded itself deep enough that the vibration shuddered through the barrier, humming low and ominous.
The ice was clear. Perfect. And just like Psycho... completely lethal.
It sat there, inches from the clipboard man’s head.
Silence fell.
Alexei tilted his head. "Sorry," he said mildly. "I must be water if that is what you think."
The clipboard man stared at the ice shard.
Then he cleared his throat.
"Level six," he said sharply, scribbling it down. "Asset. Observation required."
Alexei nodded and stepped back without another word.
Elias went next.
"Name."
"Elias Korkmaz."
"Power."
Aerenyx paused for a moment, cocking his head to the side. "Healing."
That got the attention of everyone around them.
The clipboard man leaned forward slightly. "Level?"
"Three," Elias said calmly.
The man studied him for a long moment, then nodded. "Allowed."
Lachlan didn’t miss the way one of the soldiers shifted, eyes narrowing.
Then it was Sera.
She stepped forward easily, humming trailing off as she stopped in front of the table.
"Name," the clipboard man said.
"Sera Davis."
"Power."
She smiled. Small. Polite. Empty. "None."
The pen froze.
The clipboard man looked up slowly. "Excuse me?"
"I don’t have one," she repeated with a shrug of her shoulders.
A murmur rippled behind them.
"No power?" the man asked, narrowing his eyes on her. "Are you have managed to survive this long?"
"Why not?" she smiled. "I have them." She tilted her head toward the for men and waited for a response.
The man with the clipboard stared at her for a long moment, then wrote again. "Level zero. Civilian dependent."
Lachlan felt something twist in his chest.
The clipboard man clapped his hands once. "Bags."
Soldiers stepped forward.
They went through the packs without care. Food removed. Extras taken. No explanations given.
Lachlan watched a soldier pocket a small square of chocolate that no one knew was there without comment.
Zubair’s jaw clenched.
Sera said nothing.
When it was done, the clipboard man gestured toward the next barricade. "Move along."
They passed through.
Lachlan glanced back once.
The ice shard was still embedded in the wall.
No one had touched it.
And for the first time since they’d arrived, Lachlan understood exactly what Hope Sanctuary was really measuring.
Not power... but compliance.
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