novelraw Chapter 574 Argument
Chapter 574 Argument
Chapter 574 Argument
Two young girls sat in the coffee shop, attracting many people's attention.
These two girls are not only beautiful, but also have outstanding temperament, giving people the feeling of intellectual and elegant talented women, not the kind of vulgar pinks with heavy make-up.
These two girls are Zhao Dan and her close friend Ling Yutong, whom she just met not long ago.
Like Zhao Dan, Ling Yutong is both a freelancer.
Zhao Dan works as a translator for other people's websites, and earns some online novel manuscript fees by the way, while Ling Yutong is an online seller who makes Hanfu. He works when there is an order, and rests when there is no order.
The two have relatively free time, so they often meet to go shopping and drink coffee.
"It's a little heavy!" Zhao Dan put the big and small bags beside the seat, panting a bit.
Ling Yutong laughed and said, "Isn't it enough to find a boyfriend to carry it for you? Speaking of which, you are so beautiful, why don't you have a boyfriend yet?"
"There was one before." Zhao Dan smiled faintly, "But for some reason, we broke up."
"It must be a scumbag!" Ling Yutong said very angrily, "Our family Dandan is so good, but they still broke up. If it's not a scumbag, what is it?"
"Really not." Zhao Dan quickly explained, "I was seriously ill before and thought I would not live long. I didn't want to hurt him. I abandoned him."
"So that's how it is." Ling Yutong said, "Now you are fine, you can continue!"
"He already has a girlfriend." Zhao Dan's calm face unconsciously showed a trace of bitterness that she didn't even notice, "I can't be so selfish."
"Tch, aren't you married yet? How can this be called selfish?" Ling Yutong snorted and said, "Besides, love is inherently selfish! Dandan, I support you, come back!"
"Forget it." Zhao Dan smiled and shook his head, "Drink coffee, don't think too much, the boat will be straight when it reaches the bridge."
Zhao Dan stopped talking, and Ling Yutong naturally couldn't continue this topic.
It's not good to pay too much attention all the time, it's not good to arouse Zhao Dan's suspicion.
While drinking coffee, she sent WeChat messages.
Zhao Dan didn't see Ling Yutong's cell phone, so he didn't know that the message Ling Yutong sent said, "Zhao Dan and Ye Yifeng have no personal contact, and they don't even have daily calls or WeChat messages. The use value is not very high."
In fact, what Ling Yutong didn't know was that Zhao Dan's mind was full of Ye Yifeng: what is he doing now?Should be in class, right?
Ye Yifeng was not in class, but was arguing with students in the office about how to write online novels.
This student is Xie Zhenghui from class 11, senior one. He likes to read online novels very much. Last time Ye Yifeng fooled him with a set of facial makeup formulas.
He thought that what he wrote would have many fans, but he was slapped viciously by the cruel data, which made him depressed.
Frustrated, Xie Zhenghui came to Ye Yifeng with his novel: "Ms. Ye, my writing is obviously not bad, so why do readers scold me instead of praising me?"
Ye Yifeng looked at it at a glance, and then said very rudely: "Not to mention that your story has no layout, the novel has no rhythm, and the writing is long-winded. The setting of your protagonist's character alone is a big poisonous point."
"Is the protagonist's character a big poisonous point?" Xie Zhenghui's face was a little dissatisfied, because this is what he thinks he set up the most brilliantly.
He could accept Ye Yifeng's other criticisms of him, but he really couldn't accept the criticism of his protagonist's character setting: "Teacher Ye, I have read many novels, and their protagonists are all the same as my protagonist, greedy, lustful, and selfish. What’s wrong with being self-interested, being cruel to your enemies, and being generous to your younger brothers?”
"There is a problem, and the problem is still very big." Ye Yifeng said, "A protagonist like you is too low."
"Too low?" Xie Zhenghui said, "How low?"
Ye Yifeng said: "It looks like a gangster, and it's the most trashy gangster, which reader likes it?"
"Teacher Ye, are you out?" Xie Zhenghui argued, "Which online novel has a protagonist who doesn't behave like this? It's not like they don't do it, but the protagonists of popular movies are also like this!"
"Really? Maybe. The protagonist can be down-to-earth and lecherous, but he is definitely not the kind of idiot who drools when he sees a beautiful woman. The protagonist can be greedy for money, but he must not even blacken his master's treasures unprincipled, because this master is not I'm not sorry for you."
Ye Yifeng said, "The protagonist can be ruthless, but his principle is never to kill innocent people indiscriminately. Look at your protagonist, in order to show his cruelty, he even killed an infant child, and he was just a child with no deep hatred. This kind of unprincipled and indiscriminate killing of innocents, do you think this kind of protagonist is cool? This is clearly a piece of rubbish, okay?"
"People don't kill themselves, but from the perspective of the protagonist, what's the problem?" Xie Zhenghui was still unconvinced, "Mr. Ye, if you say that about me, give me a counter-example!"
Ye Yifeng said: "Douluo's Tang San, Doupa's Xiao Yan, and the protagonists of Tomato's books, which one is as unprincipled and asshole as your protagonist?"
Xie Zhenghui said: "They are great gods with many fans. No matter how they write, people like them. We are not like that. How can we attract fans if we don't write down-to-earth!"
"Hehe, that's a good reason." Ye Yifeng said with a chuckle, "However, look at you, aren't you jumping now? You are so down-to-earth, will any readers buy it?"
"This is not the reason for the character setting, but other reasons! When I catch up with other aspects, I will definitely become popular!" Xie Zhenghui refused to admit his mistake, "Teacher Ye, your theory is so awesome, why don't you write a best-selling book Let me see!"
"Where do I have time?" Ye Yifeng rolled his eyes at Xie Zhenghui, "Also, I can taste scrambled eggs, why do I have to know how to lay eggs or scramble eggs? As a normal reader, I despise your protagonist being too low, can't you?" ?”
Xie Zhenghui couldn't compete with Ye Yifeng, but that didn't mean he was convinced: "Teacher Ye, one day, I will write a popular book that suits the character of a protagonist like mine. Just wait!"
"Haha, then I'll just wait for that day." Ye Yifeng said with a smile, "However, you should think about it now, let's talk about how to pass the final exam first."
After Xie Zhenghui left, Ye Yifeng remembered Dandan who was also writing a novel.
I haven't contacted Dandan for a long time, and I feel a little guilty: "Take it as a connection between old classmates, hum!"
(End of this chapter)